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The Legend Of Spyro : Dawn Of The Dragon - My Version [CLOSED]
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#51 Posted: 06:58:13 03/04/2011
Chapter 4 is cool, very good. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#52 Posted: 08:27:31 03/04/2011 | Topic Creator
cheers!
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362
#53 Posted: 21:49:48 06/04/2011
Trolls......
T There annoying as hell
R Rage other members
O OMG STOP IT!!!!!!!!!111111
L Like never TROLOLOL
L Let's be nic.......TROLOLOL
Anyway chapter 4 is good.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#54 Posted: 06:41:46 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
that was a bit stupid wasn't it.
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#55 Posted: 20:21:35 07/04/2011
^ Agreed.

When's chapter five?
BTW, you might need this.

Dawns Zero- She is known as Zero for short, she is a dragon from the future and is one of the dragons who have mastered Sonic Powers. Zero is 16 years old and her Sonic Ability is Sound Waves and her Sonic Aura colour is a light blue, like the stripes on her back. She get angered quite easily but when she isn't she is quite friendly. Dawns Zero's element is Electricity, but in a blue form.
Zero also has an element hidden within her, but no one knows what it is... yet. Some are guessing it is a dark, evil power but that can't be proven yet. She also has a dark form where her pale blue hide turns into the purest black and her blue stripes turn purplish-blue and the green on her horns turn red. Markings, best known as scars, are seen when she is in her dark form. It is from the dark dragon that infected her with the dark energy, you can see a red scar on her neck and rings around her tail.
But despite this darkness inside of her, Zero is a pure dragon and is known for doing good and helping to fight the evil. Her blue stripes on her back and hind legs glow when she uses Sonic Powers and her Electricity. Dawns Zero sometimes sings to herself when she is alone, but never in public and has a small group of friends and call themselves Eternity.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#56 Posted: 20:24:28 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
i started it, but tomorrow i'm going to poland and i won't be able to do it. i'll try to finish it tomorrow before i go. smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#57 Posted: 20:25:00 07/04/2011
Okay. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#58 Posted: 20:26:16 07/04/2011
Quote: Ember12
well you don't make me laugh you bast***



Calm down o_O
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#59 Posted: 20:29:09 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
that was ages ago when this perv guy posted the stuff, for your information! smilie
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#60 Posted: 20:32:12 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
you know Thunderdragon14, Bolt wants us to stop fighting and be friends again, but i don't think you'll agree with her.
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#61 Posted: 20:34:07 07/04/2011
Ohh
I thought all posts related would be deleated xD
and I don't really care, ima still keep this on as long as it lasts
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#62 Posted: 20:36:40 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
that means forever? coz i'm never gonna leave this site even if i will be 16 or even more.
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#63 Posted: 20:37:37 07/04/2011
it will go on untill you admit your SLG -.-
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#64 Posted: 20:38:55 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
which will never happen coz i'm not her!smilie
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#65 Posted: 20:39:14 07/04/2011
Anndddd were not gonn start....
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#66 Posted: 20:41:49 07/04/2011 | Topic Creator
i don't wanna start fighting again, by the way, earlier you asked me if dragite can be in my story, i say yes but she will be Zero's (Bolt's dragon) sister, i have a brill idea and dragite will appear at the end of the story.
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362
#67 Posted: 21:14:29 07/04/2011
Quote: Thunderdragon14
it will go on untill you admit your SLG -.-

Yuppers.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#68 Posted: 06:31:01 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
no one asked for your opinion, acreustheprime
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#69 Posted: 08:42:36 08/04/2011
Please, I don't want anyone to fight about this (as Ember pointed out). I really can't see how she is SLG?
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#70 Posted: 15:39:08 08/04/2011
It's easy to tell :]
NOBODEH CAN FOOL MEH.
Anywayz,
*waits for next chapter...*
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#71 Posted: 18:01:51 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Dragite will be at the end of the story as Zero's sister.
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#72 Posted: 18:10:40 08/04/2011
WHUT D:
Oh well, it's your story anyway :P
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#73 Posted: 18:13:32 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
you wanted Dragite to be in it anyway.
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#74 Posted: 18:15:10 08/04/2011
But I didn't expect that....
TIME TO GET MY POPCORN
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#75 Posted: 18:25:14 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
what?
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#76 Posted: 18:27:13 08/04/2011
You see,
Dragite wasn't born, she was created,
that's why I have this hard time trying to accept it....
*gives ember12 bag of popcorn :3*
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#77 Posted: 18:32:08 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
i might start chapter 5 in a minute and do a couple.

(thanks for the popcorn)smiliesmilie
Thunderdragon14 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8087
#78 Posted: 18:32:48 08/04/2011
I have plenty more,
my mom got the party box xD
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Quote: Alydol
go back to whining about your fish
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#79 Posted: 18:41:22 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
my english is rubbish so the story isn't very good, but it's funny. smilie
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#80 Posted: 19:04:56 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5
After 2 days and nights marching, we reached the Dragon City.
“Wow! This city I beautiful!” Zero said. She kinda looks like she has ‘fallen in love’ with the city.
“So are you.” Ooops! I said something stupid again! Now Cynder’s definitely gonna kill me!
“What?” Zero said. I think she did hear what I said.
“Nothing. I just said “Yeah, it’s beautiful”.”
“Oh. I thought you said something else.” I did actually for your information.
“Can you tell me something about that city?”
“I’m afraid I can’t. I’ve never seen it.”
“Oh. Well that’s clever isn’t it?”
Cynder was a bit annoyed with me. I think she thinks that I have a crush on Zero. Right before me, Cynder and Sparx got frozen, (well I frozen us) Cynder told me that she loves me. I didn’t love her then, but my love to Cynder is now bigger, and it gets bigger and bigger by the minute.
“When I was a little cub, Chief Prowluss thought us about dragons and about their history. The Dragon City was built long ago by the moles in honor with their friendship with the dragons. The moles still live here. They’ve been through a lot of battles and wars with Malefor’s soldiers, but the city seems to be undestroyable. No dragons live here, and never lived. I think that you Zero, might be the first one to live here, if of course the moles will say yes.” Hunter explained. Jeez! Does he ever shut up!
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#81 Posted: 21:42:57 08/04/2011
Nice part. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#82 Posted: 21:48:26 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks.smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#83 Posted: 21:51:28 08/04/2011
So Spyro likes Zero? smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362
#84 Posted: 21:51:44 08/04/2011
I HAVE RIGHTS YA KNOW!.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#85 Posted: 22:24:58 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
yes and no. you'll see later when i finished chapter 6, which will be in about 1 or 2 weeks coz i'm going on holiday.smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#86 Posted: 23:58:27 08/04/2011
Okay then. It is interesting you know. You know this makes me want to draw an adult version of Zero. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#87 Posted: 09:33:51 11/04/2011 | Topic Creator
allright! are you going to draw it? if you are i would love to see it. smilie
no wings5 Blue Sparx Gems: 804
#88 Posted: 23:58:02 17/04/2011
It seems like E12 is the troll here. Post however many mad similies you want, its still true.
Good story, but maybe it should be in the fan fiction section?
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every saint has a past,
every sinner has a future.
Spyro-Gamer Hunter Gems: 7311
#89 Posted: 00:51:12 18/04/2011
Leave Ember12 alone! (except all the people who say it's good and Bolt)
Look, she's just writing the story of what she would have liked to happen. Yes, I have to agree with some of you, this isn't HER version, and yes, she did add some parts from the really storyline, but SO WHAT? It's technically NOT copyright.
And this story DOES NOT SUCK, I think it's pretty good, though Cynder does seem a little different...she's not that annoyed or angry at Hunter or anything. So you may need to work on that.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:52:32 18/04/2011 by Spyro-Gamer
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#90 Posted: 05:07:19 18/04/2011
Yeah, S-G is right.

And Ember12, I might get around to doing it. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Spyro-Gamer Hunter Gems: 7311
#91 Posted: 07:11:39 18/04/2011
Exactly. smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#92 Posted: 07:14:32 18/04/2011
I just hope the other realize this...
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Spyro-Gamer Hunter Gems: 7311
#93 Posted: 07:18:23 18/04/2011
I doubt it.
Hey, by the way, GM was gonna give me the old script of the Spyro movie, as I'm writing part of the new one, well I think I was anyway. Have you heard from her at all?
Anyway, what's happening with the movie? Oh yeah, I've done a lot of voice-overs of Cynder and Ember. They'll be up on Youtube soon.
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#94 Posted: 07:20:59 18/04/2011
I don't know what's going on with the movie, and I haven't heard from GM.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Spyro-Gamer Hunter Gems: 7311
#95 Posted: 07:34:21 18/04/2011
Oh.
Well that's no good, is it? *sigh*
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#96 Posted: 07:42:49 18/04/2011
Nope, sadly...
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Spyro-Gamer Hunter Gems: 7311
#97 Posted: 07:44:34 18/04/2011
Hmmm...
Well, um, I'll change the subject. How've you been Bolt?
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#98 Posted: 07:46:18 18/04/2011
Good really. Got a stomach ache at the moment...
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Spyro-Gamer Hunter Gems: 7311
#99 Posted: 07:51:01 18/04/2011
Aw that's no good.
Ember12 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1081
#100 Posted: 08:02:35 18/04/2011 | Topic Creator
i can't write anything now (of the story)
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