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Lumina and Dracul, different sides, same love. [CLOSED]
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#251 Posted: 15:21:20 10/04/2010
Lucifer is dead, R.I.H
Good chapter smilie
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#252 Posted: 15:24:32 10/04/2010 | Topic Creator
ohhh R.I.H rest in hell, good one.
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#253 Posted: 01:27:16 11/04/2010
Somehow I was expecting that. Poor Lucifer.
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#254 Posted: 02:09:34 11/04/2010 | Topic Creator
i feel more sorry for Hela and Dracul.
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#255 Posted: 07:34:03 11/04/2010
I think that no one deserves Hell.
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#256 Posted: 08:01:18 11/04/2010
oooh! its getting interesting
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#257 Posted: 16:19:55 11/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 42,

Dracul comes back with a group of demons, he sees Hela.

Dracul: "mother what happen?"

Hela looks at Dracul with tears in her eyes "your father is... dead..."

Dracul: "...no... can anything be done to save him?"

Hela shook her head and sobbed.

Dracul started to cry and he ran deeper into hell.

demon: "what are we to do without a leader?"

Hela: "before lucifer died he made me the leader."

no one said anything. suddenly Lumina landed in hell and saw what happen.

Lumina: "is lucifer dead?"

Hela: "yes..."

Lumina: "i... i am so sorry."

Hela just kept weeping. Lumina decided it was best to leave her alone and she walked deeper into hell.

Lumina: "i wonder how Dracul is taking the loss of lucifer... he's probably a wreck."

she walked toward Pandemonium, she heard noises coming from another building, she walked towards that building and looked inside, she saw Dracul breaking objects what she recognized to be holy relics. Dracul was shattering the relics and cursing. Lumina had never heard such language before. Dracul walked out of the building angry. Lumina watched him walk away and then she looked in the building. pieces of broken relics lay everywhere. she went in the same direction that Dracul went. she saw him sitting in front of a small pit of lava, he was just starring into the bubbling lava sadly. a tear rolled down Dracul's face and landed in the lava. Lumina slowly walked over to Dracul and sat down beside him.

Lumina: "hey... i heard about what happen to your father..."

Dracul didn't look at her, he just kept looking at the lava. he sobbed a little.

Lumina: "Dracul?"

Dracul looked at her with tears in his eyes.

Lumina: "i'm here for you..."

Dracul kept his head low "i... just feel so lost without my father there for me..." he cried even though he was trying to fight back the tears.

Lumina wraps a wing around him "it's alright to cry... just let it out."

Dracul put his head under her head and sobbed heavily.

Lumina: "there there, it'll be alright... i'm here for you..."

Dracul just closed his eyes and continued to sob.


next chapter coming tomorrow.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#258 Posted: 16:54:28 11/04/2010
RIH. smilie
that was a little unexpected...
i feel sorry for dracul. D: i hope he gets over it soon...
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#259 Posted: 17:00:50 11/04/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah.
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#260 Posted: 21:14:57 11/04/2010
Well, who knows, it might be a better hell now with Hela in charge
Good chapter smilie
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#261 Posted: 21:24:18 11/04/2010
cool! *needs more*
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#262 Posted: 21:18:08 12/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 43,

Dracul stepped away from Lumina.

Dracul: "thank you for your compassion, but i want to be alone now." he walked towards Pandemonium with his head and wings low. he looked really depressed.

Lumina felt sorry for him "poor Dracul..." she walked towards Pandemonium and saw many demons gathered in front of it, there were thousands of demons "what's going on?" she made her way to the front of the crowd and saw lucifer's body inside a metal casket. the casket was right beside a large grave.

Hela is standing by the casket. she looks at the massive crowd of demons before her. "today is a most saddening day. our great and powerful leader lucifer fell. but he was not only a leader he was a brother, a spouse and a father. and i swear on my life that Michael and Jesus will pay dearly for killing him!"

a demon from the crowd asked "who will be our leader now?"

Hela: "before lucifer died he made me leader. i will do my best to lead us to victory and help us get our revenge."

the demons cheered.

Hela looked down at the body of lucifer, she looked at some demons standing nearby and gave them a signal. the demons closed the casket and put it in the gave and buried it. a tear rolled down Hela's cheek as she saw the soil cover the casket.

Dracul was looking out his window and saw the casket being buried. there were tears in his eyes as he saw the soil completely cover the casket.

everyone was silent when the casket was being buried as if they were giving respect.

Hela: "alright. everyone get to work and training we need to be prepared!"

every demon left. Hela went into Pandemonium.


next chapter coming Wednesday, i couldn't think of anything more to write in this chapter sorry.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#263 Posted: 23:09:48 12/04/2010
Good chapter smilie
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#264 Posted: 01:01:39 13/04/2010
so sad... i need more!!! more pwease.
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#265 Posted: 01:01:42 13/04/2010
it's okay. i liked it. smilie
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it might be a better hell now with Hela in charge

i think it just got worse for everyone in heaven. angry demons=bad
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#266 Posted: 01:02:55 13/04/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah smilie...
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#267 Posted: 01:08:04 13/04/2010
verry bad. SUPER BAD. EXTREMELY BAD!!!
lol. did i get my point across, because i have no idea what to do after this. wait, i could make something on paint and post it...smilie
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#268 Posted: 01:11:49 13/04/2010
*gasp* need.... *gasp* more *gasp* fanfiction-fuel *gasps for more air*
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#269 Posted: 01:15:56 13/04/2010
um, you still haven't posted on your story for months, and your saying you need another chapter on another persons story, right after they post it? thats strange karen.
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#270 Posted: 01:54:39 13/04/2010
Interesting. To be honest, I'm a little surprised Lucifer died, but now that I think about it, it makes sense.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#271 Posted: 18:32:35 14/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 44,

Lumina walked away from Pandemonium and headed for the training room, she heard someone following her, she turned around and saw Dracul.

Lumina: "Dracul what are you doing here?"

Dracul: "i'm going to do some training. i can't let my sorrow overcome me. I've wept long enough." he went into the training room.

Lumina followed him "would you like to train with me?"

Dracul: "yes..."

they went to the center of the room and faced each other.

Dracul: "we'll train without using magic."

Lumina: "alright. i'm ready." she crouched down and spread out her wings.

Dracul did the same. they circled each other. Dracul jumped at Lumina and softly bit her on the side of the neck, she swatted him in the face with her paw not scratching him. Dracul rammed into her and Lumina crashed into a wall. she just laid there, Dracul walked up to her. Lumina suddenly jumped at him and pinned him to the ground.

Dracul: "good sneak attack." he hit her off with his wing and got up.

Lumina got up too.

Dracul: "alright, now let's use our magic and just our magic."

Lumina: "alright."

they both crouched down and spread out their wings. Lumina breathed out a beam of light at Dracul, he breathed out a beam of darkness at her. the 2 beams collided and made an explosion that knocked both of them backwards.

Dracul: "when our magic collided it exploded. hmm."

Lumina: "what?"

Dracul: "i have an idea..." he looked at a demon "you come here."

the demon comes over.

Dracul: "stand still." he looked at Lumina "let's shoot him with our beams at once."

Lumina and Dracul both breathed their beams at the demon and as soon as the beams touched the demon there was a small explosion and the demon was knocked back into a wall, the impact made a mark in the wall. Lumina and Dracul looked at each other.

Dracul: "we could really do some damage when we combine our powers."

Lumina: "yeah no kidding."

Dracul: "we can work as a team. you know electricity right?"

Lumina: "yes."

Dracul: "well if you can combine your electricity with my beam of darkness then who knows what will happen."

Lumina: "alright let's see what we can do."

Dracul nodded and looked at another demon "you stand still." Dracul breathed a beam of darkness at the demon.

Lumina breathed a bolt of electricity at the demon, the bolt and the beam hit the demon there was an explosion of dark energy and electricity and knocked him into a wall. Lumina and Dracul looked at each other.

Lumina: "that's some power. combining our powers really did do damage."

Dracul: "yeah... let's work together in the next battle."

Lumina nodded "but until then let's try to perfect our strategy."

Dracul: "do you want to go for a walk?"

Lumina: "i would like that." she smiled.

Dracul smiled as well and they both walked out of the training room together.


next chapter coming tomorrow.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#272 Posted: 00:36:11 15/04/2010
good chapter.
i think they're starting to like eachother...smiliesmilie
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#273 Posted: 03:29:20 15/04/2010
awsome chapter!
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#274 Posted: 15:07:26 15/04/2010
Good chapter smilie
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#275 Posted: 20:20:45 15/04/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks,

Chapter 45,

Dracul and Lumina walked together through hell. Dracul was still saddened by the loss of his father. Lumina could tell he was upset.

Lumina: "it's going to be alright."

Dracul: "yes, it will be... when i can personally kill the ones who killed my father."

Lumina: "revenge isn't the best way to go. it only leads to destruction."

Dracul: "that's not what i was taught... my father told me if someone hurts you hurt them back, and that's exactly what i'm going to do."

Lumina looked at him worried.

Dracul looked at her "will you help me? i could use your help."

Lumina: "yes."

Dracul: "good, with our combined power we can get our vengeance."

Lumina: "yes..." she felt uncomfortable talking about this.

Dracul kind of smiled a little "i was just thinking what if we captured an angel that would lure that tyrant down here and then we can have our revenge on him..."

Lumina: "so how would we go about doing that?"

Dracul: "we could do that in the next battle... no wait that'll be too dangerous... we could sneak into Heaven at night and kidnap a young angel."

Lumina: "don't you think you're taking this revenge a bit too far?... i mean what you're suggesting is very dangerous."

Dracul: "come on, you saw what we have the power to do if we work together. what do you say?"

Lumina: "alright i'll come..."

Dracul smiled "thanks..."

Lumina worked up a smile too but she was very worried about this plan of Dracul's.


next chapter coming tomorrow.
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#276 Posted: 01:39:56 16/04/2010
Interesting.
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#277 Posted: 01:53:10 16/04/2010
i loooooovvvvvvveeeeeeeeee it!
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#278 Posted: 01:56:41 16/04/2010
i bet i know who they're going to capture...
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#279 Posted: 09:25:44 16/04/2010
Very interesting smilie
Good chapter smilie
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#280 Posted: 11:29:26 16/04/2010
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i bet i know who they're going to capture...


So do I.
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#281 Posted: 13:57:45 16/04/2010
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Quote: Pinkdesi101
i bet i know who they're going to capture...


So do I.



pretty obvious...although i have no idea what Lumina's reaction will be...
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#282 Posted: 21:11:57 16/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 46,

soon it became nightfall and Lumina and Dracul went into the armory and put on some armor. they walked out of the armory and towards the gates of Heaven.

Lumina: "are you sure we should be doing this?"

Dracul: "yes... and why not? angels are weak creatures i'm sure we can kidnap a little one."

Lumina didn't say anything else, they got to the gates of Heaven. they went inside Heaven.

Dracul: "let's fly above the clouds and search around the golden city. there's bound to be an angel there."

both of them took to the sky and flew above the clouds. they flew above the golden city.

in the city Timothy was walking through the streets, he was going towards his home.

Dracul flew a bit below the clouds and spotted Timothy, Dracul looked at Lumina "i bet we can take that one. let's go!" Dracul dove at Timothy, he saw Dracul and started to run. Dracul tackled him to the ground. Lumina landed beside them.

Timothy: "let me go!" he struggled.

Dracul: "no! you're coming with us!" he had some sort of a chain that was attached to his armor, he pulled it off and put it near Timothy, the chain became larger and wrapped around Timothy's body.

Timothy continued struggling but it was no use. "Jesus!... HELP!"

Jesus appears in a bright light in front of them. Dracul backs up and starred at Jesus with hatred in his eyes.

Dracul: "Lumina let's take him out!" he breathed a beam of darkness at Jesus, the beam didn't effect him at all.

Lumina didn't know what to do.

Dracul: "Lumina do something! attack him!" he breathed another beam of darkness at Jesus.

Lumina breathed a beam of light. both beams hit Jesus but had no effect.

chains came around Dracul and Lumina's legs. both of them fell to the ground unable to move. Dracul struggled heavily. Jesus came over to him and put his hand on him, Dracul was painlessly knocked unconscious. Jesus looked at Lumina.

Jesus: "i only chained you up because if i didn't Dracul would be suspicious."

the chains from around Lumina disappeared, she stood up "good thinking Master."

Timothy was still chained up "... could you please get me out of here?"

the chains from around him disappeared, Timothy stood up "thank you... so what do we do about him?" he pointed to Dracul who was still out cold.


YAY! cliffhanger! next chapter coming tomorrow.
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#283 Posted: 21:18:48 16/04/2010
Good Chapter.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#284 Posted: 22:35:47 16/04/2010
dang it! i hate cliffhangers! smilie
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#285 Posted: 15:09:03 17/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 47,

a few hours later Dracul awoke in a small room, his legs were still chained together. there was a door, the door opened and Jesus walked inside. Dracul looked at him afraid at what's going to happen, Dracul tried to breathe fire at him but only a puff of smoke came out.

Jesus: "don't waste your breath trying to use your magic because you can't."

Dracul: "wha-... what are you going to do to me?"

Jesus: "nothing."

Dracul: "what have you done with Lumina!?"

Jesus: "nothing. she is safe and unharmed."

Dracul growls "i swear if you harm one scale on her i'll-..."

Jesus: "i wouldn't think about harming her. you really like her don't you?"

Dracul: "yes... and you know this... you're going to use this against me aren't you!?"

Jesus: "no... like i said i would never think about harming Lumina." he walked out of the room and closed the door.

Lumina walks up to Jesus "how is Dracul doing Master?"

Jesus: "Dracul is afraid i'm going to harm you."

Lumina: "Dracul's concerned about my safety?"

Jesus: "yes... he admitted that he likes you."

Lumina: "may i go see him?"

Jesus: "are you going to tell him the truth about you?"

Lumina nodded "he has to know sooner or later... i just hope he understands."

Jesus: "if he cares about you the way he seems to i'm sure he will."

Lumina nods and opens the door, she walks inside the room and sees Dracul laying on the floor at the back of the room chained up. she walks towards him.

Dracul sees her "Lumina thank goodness you're alright."

Lumina: "yes Dracul. i'm fine."

Dracul: "good now get me free quick before that tyrant comes back."

Lumina: "Dracul i have something to tell you."

Dracul struggled to get free of the chains "can't it wait until we escape?"

Lumina: "no Dracul. i'm a spy."

Dracul looked at her in shock "you-... you're a spy?"

Lumina: "yes... this whole time I've been working for Jesus."

Dracul: "you have!?"

Lumina slowly nodded.

Dracul: "you... you're a traitor! and i bet you helped kill my father didn't you!?"

Lumina: "no... i had nothing to do with his death."

Dracul: "i can't believe you're working for the tyrant who killed my father!"

Lumina: "Dracul, Jesus had no plans to kill lucifer."

Dracul: "oh yeah sure!... just like Michael didn't have any plan to stab my father in the heart to kill him!"

Lumina: "Dracul i'm sorry about everything that's happen..."

Dracul bared his teeth and growled at her. "just leave me alone..." he rolled over onto his other side and faced away from Lumina.

Lumina slowly walked out of the room and closed the door behind her.


next chapter coming tomorrow... or today... i don't know...
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#286 Posted: 18:39:29 17/04/2010
*Distant engineer "Spy Sappin Ma Dragon!"*
Sad but Good chapter smilie and smilie
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#287 Posted: 19:01:19 17/04/2010
aww. *cries* so sad
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#288 Posted: 20:21:36 17/04/2010
*cries*
sad chapter. smilie
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#289 Posted: 20:24:42 17/04/2010 | Topic Creator
i know.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#290 Posted: 20:38:49 17/04/2010
i'm going to die of sadness. *falls over*
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#291 Posted: 00:56:36 18/04/2010
Poor Lumina...
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#292 Posted: 13:43:39 18/04/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah i feel sorry for her too.

Chapter 48,

Dracul managed to sleep the rest of the night but he wasn't very comfortable. he awoke in the morning, he tried to get free of the chains, he bit and pulled at them but he still couldn't get free.

Dracul: "i wonder if my mother even knows i'm gone...and if she does know how would she know to look for me here..." his hope of freedom was fading away "i wonder what that tyrant and his slaves are going to do to me?" thoughts of pain and suffering filled his head as he pondered this. suddenly he heard the door open, he turned his head towards the door and saw Lumina standing there.

Lumina: "good morning." she said that in a calm and quiet voice and walked toward him.

Dracul looked away from her and growled softly.

Lumina walks over to him, she has some grapes in her paw, she sets them down in front of Dracul's mouth.

Dracul looks at the grapes "you think offering me food will make up for anything?"

Lumina sat down near him "no... but i thought you may be hungry, i just wanted to be kind to you."

Dracul: "no amount of kindness could ever make up for what you did."

Lumina: "and what did i do to hurt you?"

Dracul: "you tricked me, you betrayed me, you lied to me."

Lumina: "but i also saved your life twice, i comforted you when you were mourning, i healed you when you were unconscious."

Dracul: "all those things you did were just part of tricking me... they were lies and deceptions from a spy!"

Lumina: "no they weren't... Dracul i really do care about you. i wasn't doing those things to deceive you. i did those things because i care about you."

Dracul didn't say anything.

Lumina: "and i know you care about me. the time when you didn't want to fight or torture me, the time when you trusted me to help you train."

Dracul: "that was when i didn't know you were a lying traitor."

Lumina: "i'm still the same... i'm not a professional spy that would disguise their complete personality in order to fool someone. everything i did to help you was real. i wasn't trying to fool you when i healed you or when i saved your life or even when i was spending time talking to you and walking with you and spending time with you. everything i did was real."

Dracul didn't say anything, he just ate some of the grapes in front of him. he finished eating and looked at her "if you do care about me you'll release me from these chains and let me go back to hell."

Lumina: "in your state of anger and bitterness towards me right now i can't do that for the concern for my own safety. i'm sorry."

Dracul: "what is that supposed to mean?"

Lumina: "because you're so angry towards me if i free you, you might attack me or run back to hell and tell some demons to go after me or something like that. i can't really trust you until you trust me and i know you will."

there was silence for awhile. Lumina stood up "i'll give you some time alone to gather your thoughts." she left the room and closed the door behind her.


next chapter coming tomorrow.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#293 Posted: 15:25:22 18/04/2010
good chapter...still a little sad though....
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#294 Posted: 15:33:09 18/04/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah.

if anyone has any suggestions please tell me.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#295 Posted: 15:48:08 18/04/2010
i'm using all my ideas on other things xD
srry though....
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#296 Posted: 15:48:43 18/04/2010 | Topic Creator
that's alright.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#297 Posted: 17:31:26 18/04/2010
Good chapter smilie
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#298 Posted: 18:04:51 19/04/2010
Interesting.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#299 Posted: 22:25:13 19/04/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks,

Chapter 49,

Lumina walked over to Jesus who was sitting on his throne.

Lumina: "Dracul still isn't responding well to me or my kindness towards him."

Jesus: "he's still mourning about the loss of his father..."

Lumina: "well he said that if i cared about him i'll release him."

Jesus stood up "i'll try to talk to him."

Lumina: "but... he hates you."

Jesus: "i know... but somewhere deep down in his heart he cares about you. he may even love you... and he'll learn not to hate me soon enough." he walks towards the room where Dracul is in.

Dracul had been trying to escape his chains for some time but he got tiered after a while and just laid there on the floor. he heard the door open, he rolled on his other side to look at the door. he saw Jesus come into the room and closed the door behind him. Dracul scooted into the back of the room and up to a wall, he was very fearful because he knew he could do nothing.

Jesus: "relax, i won't harm you."

Dracul: "just leave me alone... i want nothing to do with the one who killed my father!"

Jesus: "Dracul, lucifer will live again i can promise you that much."

Dracul: "... no you can't promise me anything you tyrant!"

Jesus walks over to him "just give Lumina and i a chance. or at least give her a chance."

Dracul: "why should i give that traitor and liar a chance!?"

Jesus: "because she cares about you. she maybe even loves you."

Dracul: "if she loved me she would leave you and free me and come back to hell with me."

Jesus: "that wouldn't be the smartest thing to do... but if you loved her you would forgive her and live here in Heaven where no one will torture you or make you train for hours, and where you have peace and comfort."

Dracul: "and be a slave to you!"

Jesus: "i don't have slaves, i do have servants but they are all my children and i love them... you can be my child too if you live here."

Dracul growled "i will never be your child!... lucifer is my father!... and i don't want to live here!"

Jesus: "you'll be happy here."

Dracul: "no i won't! my place is in hell, my destiny is in hell to take my father's place!"

Jesus: "is that really what you want to be ruler over the demons then to be here in Heaven?"

Dracul: "yes!"

Jesus: "you're only fooling yourself if you really feel that way. i know somewhere deep in your heart you want to live in Heaven and be with Lumina."

Dracul said nothing.

Jesus: "i just hope you realize that soon."

the chains from around Dracul's legs disappear and a magic chain appears around Dracul's neck, the chain is long and attached to the wall. the chain wasn't tight around his neck but he couldn't get loose from it easily. Jesus walked out of the room and closed the door.


next chapter coming Wednesday.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#300 Posted: 22:42:15 19/04/2010
good chaper! smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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