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Spyro: The Third beginning *Spoilers from DotD* [CLOSED]
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#201 Posted: 15:04:35 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, as I promised..


Chapter 14.

While Spyro had already rushed to help the people inside the burning house, Cynder still looked around for any ways she could help. She didn't want to tell it to Spyro, but she was not comfortable with the idea of going inside a burning deathtrap. Not even to save lives..

So, she went to Terrador, who had just the task for her..

"You want me to help get people out of here?!.." Cynder asked, she had to shout because of the noise..

"I know it might not sound like an important task, but these people are on the way! We need to get this area cleared!" Terrador replied.

"Where I would take them?!" Cynder shouted.

"We were thinking about using the Ruins of Old Warfang as a safe haven for those who've lost their homes.. Do you still remember where the gate inside is?.." He asked.

Cynder nodded. Terrador sent her away, and she began to gather the people together..

"Everyone come on! I'll lead you to somewhere safe!" Cynder shouted. The panicing crowd reacted slowly, but soon everyone was ready to leave..

Exept for one elderly mole, who sat on the curb, and just wouldn't move..

"Come on mister, we have to go now!" Cynder yelled to the mole..

"B.. But this is my home.." The mole said with low, squealing voice..

"Your home is burning, you can't stay here!" Cynder yelled.

"I already had to leave once, I won't leave again.." The mole insisted..

"I'll get you out of here even if I'd have to carry you on my back!.." Cynder said.

She tried to push the old mole forward, with little success. The mole proved to be steady footed, and Cynder had never been very strong..

"I'll help." A clear, male voice said behind her..

Cynder turned her head and saw a teenaged red dragon.. The dragon pushed the mole on his feet with little effort, and the mole ceaced to resist moving..

"Thanks.." Cynder said, looking at the dragon. Then she got an idea that would make her job a lot easier, "Can you help me get these people out of here?.."

"Well.. Why not!" The dragon said, and smiled, "I'm here to help.."

"Thanks, again.." Cynder replied..

Cynder started leading the people forwards. With the help of her new friend, few to no distractions occurred on the way..
The dragon seemed quite friendly, and ready to help, concidering the fact that she'd never seen him before..

Soon, the people that had lost their homes on the attack, were led to the safety of the caves.. Cynder got out smiling, helping others felt good, even though it had been a lot of trouble for her..
She saw the red dragon she had met earlier, walking towards her. She sat on the ground and waited patiently..

"Thanks for the help.." She said and smiled, when the red dragon had approached her..

"Oh, that was nothing.." The dragon answered, "Uhh, listen.. I know we just met, but I've always been kinda straightforward with pretty girls like you.. So, uhh.. Would you like to meet again someday?"

Cynder blushed, and chuckled quietly. So this was what he had been after..
The dragon looked quite handsome, psychically he looked a lot stronger than Spyro. But still, she had to resist..

"I appreciate it, but I can't.. Sorry.. I already have a companion.." Cynder said..

"Oh.." The dragon said, and looked to the ground, "Well, it was nice to meet you anyway.."

"Yeah, it was.." Cynder said. Only when the dragon started to walk off, Cynder remembered they hadn't even been properly introduced..

"Wait!" She shouted.

On a split second, the red dragon turned his head. Like he had been waiting for Cynder to call him back..

"I'm Cynder.. What's your name?.." Cynder asked.

"I'm Flame." The dragon said, nodded with a smile, then continued walking away..

"Flame.." Cynder said to herself quietly..


K, I'll add more in few days again!
Edit: Fixed some misspellings there, before any of you read this.. smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:07:05 18/01/2010 by Samius
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#202 Posted: 15:21:20 18/01/2010
wow now Flame is in the story... whose next Moneybags?
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#203 Posted: 15:24:45 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Actually I hadn't planned on adding any other characters..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#204 Posted: 15:27:03 18/01/2010
ok... can't wait for more chapters.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#205 Posted: 16:12:27 18/01/2010
Good chapter smilie
I sort of expected that if Ember was in this story, then so would Flame
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#206 Posted: 16:14:00 18/01/2010
i knew Flame would be in the story as soon as the teenage red dragon came.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#207 Posted: 20:30:32 18/01/2010
awesome chappy smilie
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#208 Posted: 21:39:31 18/01/2010
Totally bomb! smilie I see huge drama chance in future
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#209 Posted: 21:57:10 18/01/2010
Great chapter!
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I'm batman!! Shh...
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#210 Posted: 04:10:16 19/01/2010
Yeah,I see huge drama too!smilie I knew it was smilie once you said teenage red dragon.
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shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#211 Posted: 00:15:38 21/01/2010
awsome chapter, it was a giva way with the teenage red dragon.

i wonder how itll be with spyro cynder flame and ember*thinks*
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#212 Posted: 00:21:42 21/01/2010
smilie is cool smilie smilie
GoldenDragon Yellow Sparx Gems: 1191
#213 Posted: 01:00:14 21/01/2010
Yeah, cool story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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~Best friends 'till the end of time: GamingMaster_76smilie and Nicksmilie~
Everyone has a dark side. Whether or not you choose it is the question.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#214 Posted: 01:24:59 21/01/2010
..smilie...Quote: Flame
Error: You did not include a message.
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#215 Posted: 03:37:33 21/01/2010
*waits patiently for next chapter*Now that you added smilie and smilie it's hard to wait!smilie
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Wait, what?
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#216 Posted: 16:50:03 22/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, it seem like you just gotta.. Tomorrow is my birthday party, I'll get to add another chapter on sunday..
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#217 Posted: 17:55:22 22/01/2010
happy birthday Samius, im new & your stories are really good. have fun at your party.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#218 Posted: 17:58:10 22/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks! Wow, I've had a lot of new readers recently..

And well, my actual birthday was three days ago.. But we couldn't hold the parties at the middle of the week..

Have you read the first part already?..

Edit: The first story I mean.. If you haven't, you can find the link on the first post of this topic.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:59:21 22/01/2010 by Samius
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#219 Posted: 19:15:16 22/01/2010
Happy birthday Samius. I know its a little late
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#220 Posted: 23:28:19 22/01/2010
yeah i did it was really good. which is why i was excited to read this one. im not a huge fan of reading trust me. But this is really good. cant wait for more. Enjoy yourself tomorrow. plus sorry for the late birthday response.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#221 Posted: 00:37:32 23/01/2010
Quote: Samius
Thanks! Wow, I've had a lot of new readers recently..

And well, my actual birthday was three days ago.. But we couldn't hold the parties at the middle of the week..

Have you read the first part already?..

Edit: The first story I mean.. If you haven't, you can find the link on the first post of this topic.


i know this is late, but happy birthday! smilie
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#222 Posted: 02:51:54 23/01/2010
Yeah,go have fun at your party and happy birthdaysmilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#223 Posted: 07:31:43 23/01/2010
YAY COOL STORY YA YA YA YA MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! BWA HA HA HA!
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#224 Posted: 11:23:51 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks everybody!
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#225 Posted: 11:22:35 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Uhh.. Sorry, I couldn't write yesterday. I had a lot of schoolwork to do..

I'll try to write more later today, I'm at school now..
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#226 Posted: 11:24:59 25/01/2010
mkay... well anyway, i needa go, cya in... tommorow... or whenever.. smilie
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#227 Posted: 18:00:33 25/01/2010
Its ok bro. Take your time, I hope your birthday party went well.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#228 Posted: 18:09:58 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, I do have a lot of schoolwork to do right now..
And, well, writing a new chapter always takes a lot of time, cuz I don't think about what I'm going to write beforehand..
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#229 Posted: 19:20:08 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, this is still going to take a lot of time. Again, I'll try to write more tomorrow.. Sorry..
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#230 Posted: 20:46:06 25/01/2010
hey its ok no worries.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#231 Posted: 15:11:54 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Damn, It's hard to try to think of anything new..
I think I need a break from all this writing, I've been doing it a lot lately and it's stressing me out a bit.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#232 Posted: 15:30:52 26/01/2010
Then take your time and keep that break
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#233 Posted: 18:07:39 26/01/2010
Yeah bro, just relax. Just like a great game, take your time relax, and think of something later. Hey how was your party samius?
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#234 Posted: 21:33:11 26/01/2010
yeah. maybe you have a block which takes a while to go away.
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#235 Posted: 22:58:14 26/01/2010
Yeah,we understand.If yu have a writer's block,it takes a while to go away.
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#236 Posted: 11:35:42 27/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeh, maybe..

And the party was really fun, thanks! smilie
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#237 Posted: 18:41:10 27/01/2010
Well thats what matters. I'm glad. ^.=.^
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#238 Posted: 23:04:04 27/01/2010
writers block huh. well, just take some time 2 rest. Youve done a great job with the story. u diserve a rest samius. :)
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#239 Posted: 23:43:15 27/01/2010
^ yeah. smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#240 Posted: 13:04:32 28/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks, I might doodle something up on my art topic for a change.. smilie
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#241 Posted: 17:15:58 28/01/2010
awesome man, I'll keep an eye out.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#242 Posted: 23:05:21 28/01/2010
i needa make an art topic...

not right now tho.

yes it was sorta off topic.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#243 Posted: 07:25:41 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
It's okay, I don't care, since I'm taking a break from writing these chapters..
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#244 Posted: 01:25:09 30/01/2010
oh, you have an art topic? i didnt know about that ill take a look at it.:)
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#245 Posted: 01:42:29 30/01/2010
I have a plushie:

[User Posted Image]
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#246 Posted: 03:21:05 30/01/2010
hey that looks just like my plushi.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#247 Posted: 03:24:52 30/01/2010
really?

finally, someone ELSE who has it! smilie smilie
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#248 Posted: 06:44:23 30/01/2010
Cool,that looks like my plushie too.
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#249 Posted: 06:48:50 30/01/2010
dont be diceved, its 22 inches tall and it isnt as soft as you'd expect.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#250 Posted: 09:38:59 30/01/2010
I think we are going a little off topic here, no offense
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
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