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Spyro: The Third beginning *Spoilers from DotD* [CLOSED]
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#151 Posted: 17:51:09 02/01/2010
Awesome, as always xDDD
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#152 Posted: 17:54:57 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#153 Posted: 18:33:07 02/01/2010
Great chapter!
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I'm batman!! Shh...
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#154 Posted: 00:11:22 03/01/2010
haha busted again! Cynder 2 Spyro 0.

good chapter, i find it funny when Spyro gets busted.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205
#155 Posted: 04:04:40 03/01/2010
good sequel
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 04:05:41 03/01/2010 by spyro523
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#156 Posted: 11:53:08 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Hey! You finally came!
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#157 Posted: 19:14:30 03/01/2010
Quote: Samius
Hey! You finally came!


Hey. When you write more and one thing keep buzzing in my head. Spyro cursed, but how we know that he curse like that? do Dragons have same gods than us? just asking because "Sweet ancestors" could be better....just saying because i want this buzzing out of my head
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#158 Posted: 15:10:35 04/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, god doesn't necessarily mean our God..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#159 Posted: 21:11:19 04/01/2010
oh, ok
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#160 Posted: 01:34:01 05/01/2010
Great chapter!Man smilie Spyro needs to watch what he says,he's gotten busted a lot (2 is still a lot smilie)
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Wait, what?
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#161 Posted: 06:07:35 06/01/2010
yeh. I agree.
he might even get three times lucky. smilie
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#162 Posted: 16:20:57 08/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Reminder to all of you, now that school has begun, I won't be updating this page, and my art topic as often..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#163 Posted: 10:16:07 09/01/2010
Umm, not even during weekends?
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#164 Posted: 11:03:19 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, it's saturday now, isn't it?.. smilie
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#165 Posted: 13:36:25 09/01/2010
yes it is are you gonna do another chapter.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#166 Posted: 13:41:22 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'll see if I can make up something..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#167 Posted: 13:44:33 09/01/2010
ok thanks.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#168 Posted: 14:24:36 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Can't really think of anything..

Can you still wait for tomorrow?..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#169 Posted: 15:19:44 09/01/2010
yes i can wait.
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#170 Posted: 01:13:07 10/01/2010
I can wait.... BUT NOT PATIENTLY.
You have school already?! I have at least 4 weeks till school starts again.
smilie
OMG.... what a scary and depressing thought. 4 weeks is gonna fly by on a super speed rocket and I won't even realize....
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#171 Posted: 01:14:47 10/01/2010
I've already been in school for a week! And we only have 2 weeks off! Lucky you!
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I'm batman!! Shh...
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#172 Posted: 12:20:42 10/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, here's more..


Chapter 12.

Spyro and Cynder walked down to the great hall. It was already early so they weren't expecting to see anyone awake..
However, when the two entered the hall, their ears were filled with noise, There were people were inside the hall, shouting and yelling like animals..
Spyro saw Cyril over the people on the center of the hall, he flew to him, Cynder following close behind..

"What's going on?!" Spyro shouted, to make his voice clear out from the yelling mob of people..

"Why are all there people here?!" Cynder asked loudly..

"Spyro, Cynder, something terrible has happened! A part of the city was attacked in the middle of the night, and the whole place is in chaos!" Cyril shouted..

"What?!" Spyro shouted, "Who attacked?!"

"Come with me!" Cyril shouted, and flew outside the hall, away from all the noise..

"We don't know who's responsible yet, but we suspect that it might have been Malefor's servants.." Cyril said, once Spyro and Cynder had gotten outside.

"Malefor's servants?.. What are they doing here?.." Cynder said.

Cyril laid a disappointed look on Cynder..

"Just because you two managed to finish off Malefor, his servants still live, disguised as normal people.." Cyril explained, "It would seem that they're still trying to finish their master's work.."

"Why we weren't informed earlier?.." Spyro said, "We might have been able to help.."

"I'm sorry Spyro, but this attack came as a surprise to all of us. Altough I've always said this was only a question of time.."

"Are there any casualties?" Spyro asked..

"Many, I'm afraid.. Hundreds maybe." Cyril said.

"If you would have told us maybe we could've saved more people!" Spyro yelled angrily, "I can't just sit one out!"

"Wait.. Where's Terrador?.." Cynder asked suddenly..

"He's there, at the scene of the attack.. He's still trying to get the fire's under control.." Cyril said.

"Spyro, if we go now, maybe we can still help them!" Cynder said.

"Yeah, let's go!" Spyro said, and rose to the air. Cynder followed close behind him..

"Wait! What if.." Cyril shouted behind them, but Spyro and Cynder were already out of earshot..

It angered Spyro how the guardians wouldn't let him know of this. Like they didn't fully trust him..
Cynder knew why, she had noticed the sudden change in Spyro's behaviour, and hoped it wouldn't take a turn for the worse..


Kay, there you go..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#173 Posted: 12:59:49 10/01/2010
good chapter.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#174 Posted: 13:38:05 10/01/2010
Good chap!smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#175 Posted: 17:59:05 10/01/2010
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#176 Posted: 18:26:36 10/01/2010
good chapter.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#177 Posted: 23:15:57 10/01/2010
Good chapter.
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#178 Posted: 05:10:33 11/01/2010
hey i took ur atvice and read te second begining and its awsome! plus im all caght up on this one yay
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#179 Posted: 21:22:33 11/01/2010
This is not my favorite capter. Not much happened in it but now we are sure something is not rigth with Spyro. I miss fight parts what you did in your first story Samius, we saw how Spyro fought but i really wanna see what Cynder can do, after all, she was Malefor's servant once. I don't demand you to do that, i just said what i thought. Like you asked peopple to do in your first story.


We wait more.....no...we demand it smilie
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:24:03 11/01/2010 by deaver88
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#180 Posted: 14:57:43 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I know, but why to rush it?.. The story is just beginning.. smilie
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#181 Posted: 11:26:02 13/01/2010
Ooh..... Spyro is seriously not normal at the moment.
I wonder why....
I think I know but still.
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#182 Posted: 08:31:34 14/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Hey, I'll write more today, but only later. I'm at school right now..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#183 Posted: 15:16:20 14/01/2010
You are here now! and do you write more like you promised
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#184 Posted: 15:18:50 14/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm writing more right now, It might still take a while.. smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#185 Posted: 17:19:03 14/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay heres more..


Chapter 13.

Spyro and Cynder hurried to the site of the attack. Because of the smoke, the site was easily visible from the air..
When the two reached the site, they immediately saw Terrador, who had his hands full, trying to evacuate the people who had not yet made it out..
Spyro and Cynder approached him..

"Terrador! Cyril told us what happened here! Is everything under control?!" Spyro shouted.

"Nowhere near it!" Terrador shouted back, "There are still people inside these buildings, and we have to get them out!"

Cynder looked around herself, and saw the chaos that had taken over the streets. Buildings were on fire, and people were running all around the streets, screaming..

"Can we help?" She shouted quickly..

"By all means! We need all idle hands to get these people evacuated!" Terrador replied..

"Okay.." CYnder said, and turned to Spyro, "We should spilt up, so we can help more people, we can take care of ourselves right?.." She said.

"I quess.. Okay! I'll take that one over there!" Spyro said, and nodded towards a nearby building, "I'll see you here once we're done!"

Cynder nodded, and left running to another direction, leaving Spyro alone. He gathered his courage, and rushed towards the building..
The doors were sealed by a burning rubble, Spyro could hear people screaming inside..

"Back off, I'm coming in!" Spyro shouted, started to run towards the door, and transformed to an earth boulder..

He crashed trough the pile of wood and the way inside was now open.. People rushed out of the smoke-filled room and nearly trampled Spyro on their way.
One mole staid to help him get up, Spyro asked him..

"Are there others?.."

"Uhh.. I'm pretty sure there was a dragoness somewhere in the upper floors, I doupt that she made it out!"

"Thanks, now get out of here!"

The mole thanked Spyro for saving their lives, then he rushed out of the building..

Spyro found a stone staircase that lead to the upper floor, the way was shut, but he rammed it open with his head..
Shaking his head after the collision, Spyro heard a female-scream from above him..

"Hang on, I'm coming!" Spyro shouted as hard as he could..

He continued climbing up the staircase, the rooms upstairs were already filled with smoke. He had to move fast, or else the dragoness wouldn't make it..
Soon he reached the top floor of the building. It was black with smoke, that made his eyes water and made him cough, but he wouldn't give up..
He crashed open the one final door that separated him and the dragoness he had risked his hide for.. He rushed in, and noticed the form of the dragoness, lying on the floor with her eyes closed tight..

Spyro quickly threw her on his back, and started making his way down.. The fires were blocking their way down, but Spyro kept breating ice on the flames to cool them down..
And finally, he reached the first floor, and ran out of the building, coughing violently on the way..

He put the dragoness on the ground, and poked her with his nose.
She opened her eyes, and took a deep look at Spyro..
Spyro looked at the her too, he couldn't tell what color she was, as she was compeletely black because of the smoke..
But she had the most beatiful eyes Spyro had ever seen..

"Wow.. If someone would have told me yesterday, that a purple dragon would save me from a burning house, I would've laughed on his face.." The dragoness said, and blinked her eyes..

"Well, I.." Spyro said, trying to sound modest. He looked around himself and tried to spot Cynder, but she was nowhere nearby..

"What are you looking at?.." The dragoness said..

"My friend, I thought she'd be here.." Spyro said..

"Oh, don't worry.. I bet she's already been evacuated with the rest.." The dragoness said, looking around herself..

"Uh, yeah.. And your name is?.." Spyro asked..

"Ember.." The dragoness said, "My name is Ember.."


There.. Sorry it took so long, our electricity was cut out suddely, and I had to start over..
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#186 Posted: 17:39:52 14/01/2010
Love it smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#187 Posted: 17:41:44 14/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Did you like the surprise?.. smilie
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#188 Posted: 17:43:12 14/01/2010
Yesh, which is why i said i loved it *shot* smilie

*waits for Cynder vs Ember fantards to come in*

xDDD
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#189 Posted: 17:49:22 14/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Soon, mushroom clouds will block out the sky, and the purifying fire in witch we all shall burn will descent upon us..*

(*Prophesy referring to the Great War of the Fantards)
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#190 Posted: 19:40:34 14/01/2010
wow Ember?... i wouldn't have guessed that it was Ember.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#191 Posted: 20:25:26 14/01/2010
Quote: Samius
Did you like the surprise?.. smilie



Heh, i loved that suprise. But even when Mole sait "there is dragoness up there......" I had a small scent what you was up to but i wasn't sure. that made my stomatch tickle and i had to read the rest. this one of your best chapters because it very very addictinn and you have to read it all to find out things. Good, very very good work Samius
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#192 Posted: 21:50:56 14/01/2010
Quote: deaver88
Quote: Samius
Did you like the surprise?.. smilie



Heh, i loved that suprise. But even when Mole sait "there is dragoness up there......" I had a small scent what you was up to but i wasn't sure. that made my stomatch tickle and i had to read the rest. this one of your best chapters because it very very addictinn and you have to read it all to find out things. Good, very very good work Samius


What he said! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#193 Posted: 21:58:33 14/01/2010
Quote: Cynder 19000
Quote: deaver88
Quote: Samius
Did you like the surprise?.. smilie



Heh, i loved that suprise. But even when Mole sait "there is dragoness up there......" I had a small scent what you was up to but i wasn't sure. that made my stomatch tickle and i had to read the rest. this one of your best chapters because it very very addictinn and you have to read it all to find out things. Good, very very good work Samius


What he said! smilie


ditto! smilie
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#194 Posted: 05:24:32 16/01/2010
dreat surprise, that was unexpected
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#195 Posted: 10:16:19 16/01/2010
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#196 Posted: 17:02:20 16/01/2010
Awesome!LOVED the surprise!
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Wait, what?
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#197 Posted: 06:18:56 17/01/2010
I hope you don't pair Spyro up with Ember.......
But anyway, great chapter!
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#198 Posted: 10:38:27 17/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'll add moar tomorrow.. smilie
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#199 Posted: 13:34:05 17/01/2010
yay more's coming.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#200 Posted: 19:13:19 17/01/2010
yay...no...YAY! *dance*
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
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