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Spyro Story [CLOSED]
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#151 Posted: 18:19:19 18/07/2008
post it!
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Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#152 Posted: 18:21:19 18/07/2008
Cynder looked around, looking for where the voice came from. She saw nothing at first, then something was coming into her sight. A black dragon was flying straight towards her! She thought it was coming to kill her, so she started to fly away. But as she was taking flight, the dragon yelled, "Do not be frightened! I am not here to harm you!" Cynder was scared, she knew Dark Dragons served her Master, but why did this one say he was not here to kill her? "Who are you?" she asked him as he landed on the rock next to Cynder. "My name is Nalemor, and I am here to stop you from killing Spyro." he replied in a cold, yet gentle voice.

"But Nalemor, Spyro has been corrupted by the Master, he is much stronger than him. He has the power to overrun my Master, with me. But if I do not kill Dark Spyro, he will kill me for trying to overrun the Master!" Nalemor then replied, "Cynder, if you kill Dark Spyro, you are also killing Spyro. There is another way to save him. And I know just where to begin.
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This is really my first time trying to write in a story. I hope you like it.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#153 Posted: 18:26:08 18/07/2008
WOW! that is cool. I think it reads like you have been writing your whole life!
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#154 Posted: 18:29:47 18/07/2008
Awesone, Nalemor!
I totaly agree with Owl smilie
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#155 Posted: 18:33:16 18/07/2008
I changed it, forgive me. NOwl, so people don't think Owl is a new user.

and here is a pic of infinity

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Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#156 Posted: 18:34:12 18/07/2008
is it really that good? smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#157 Posted: 18:37:18 18/07/2008
Well, atleast now I know how Infinity looks like. Thanks smilie
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#158 Posted: 18:38:53 18/07/2008
REALLY!
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Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#159 Posted: 18:40:25 18/07/2008
Thanks!
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#160 Posted: 18:44:02 18/07/2008
D_C, you go next!
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#161 Posted: 18:45:26 18/07/2008
Ok, but I'm warning you, this will take 4ever smilie
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#162 Posted: 18:47:54 18/07/2008
we can wait smilie

but i G2G, i'll be back on later tonight
Last edited at 18:48:44 18/07/2008 by Nalemor
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#163 Posted: 18:48:59 18/07/2008
Yep. I WANT IT NOW! that didn't last long....
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#164 Posted: 18:49:03 18/07/2008
Ok, good luck, Nalefor! smilie
Last edited at 18:50:08 18/07/2008 by Dark_Cynder
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#165 Posted: 19:03:03 18/07/2008
lol
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#166 Posted: 20:07:31 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Awesome Chpater Nalefor!smilie

I'll do the next Chapter!

Cynder looked at Dark Spyro sadly he was weak, hurt, and shivering from being drenched in the cold water. She could also see the Spyro she had once known and cared for. "What have I done?" She sighed she was now weeping. Nalemor just looked at her. "Do you feel different then before?" He asked. Cynder just looked up at him. "I am able to think and feel without someone doing it for me! I am not coruppted anymore! But how?" She said her face brightning. "But that doesn't change things she added sadly.

"Cynder." He began. "Do you know what black dragons are capable of?" "Fear, Shadow, Poisen, and Wind." She answered glumly. "No my friend" Nalemor said as a smile went across his face. "The are capable of Light." "Light?" She said. "How? All I have been capable of is all the darkelements!" "Yes with you it has been most unfortunate. But now Cynder you are able too your affection for your friends have giving you a pure heart that is right about to release the most powerful element of all time! Now come follow me." He smiled. "It is about time Dark Spyro is Spyro again and you learned
your true element."

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There it is hope ya like it!smilie
Last edited at 22:47:39 18/07/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#167 Posted: 20:20:18 18/07/2008
Awesome Chapter, C_R! Here's mine smilie:

<Chapter 19: The Moon ruins>

Nalemor with a single flap of his wings made a black forcefield around the Dark dragon. It was round, like an orb. The little black dragon shot a shadowy black chain from his right hand, right at the Dark orb. The chain looked more like a cord, then a chain, but it was stronger. It connected. “Now, follow me, Cynder” Nalemor said and flew up in to the sky, still holding the fogged chain. He moved, and the Orb forcefield also flew right after him. Cynder flew up and once she flied near the little dragon, she spoke: “So, where are we going?”; “To a place, where everyone wants to be…” Cynder didn’t answer. She didn’t quite understand, what did he mean, but she decided not to disturb him. Cynder saw that Nalemor is concentrating to hold the Dark forcefield active. In fact, Dark Spyro already tried to get out of his flying cell, there for it was even harder to save it.

After a long flight with Nalemor, Cynder saw something beautiful in the middle of the forest. It was shining with bright light. But that light looked more like a white fug. Nalemor started to glide down slowly, right in to the bright fug. Cynder repeated his moves. Once they entered the white fug, they carefully landed on the completely white grass. “ I can’t go further, or else the energy that surrounds the other side of this forest will kill me. Here, take this Dark chain and lead Spyro right in there” Nalemor said, handing Cynder the chain and pointing in the light fug. “Why can you die?” Cynder asked. “It doesn’t matter now. Go, now…” the black dragon said and left the completely white area. Cynder thought, as she walked deeper in to the light: ”…or else the energy that surrounds the other side of this forest will kill me… Hmmm… Perhaps that energy is…”.
“LIGHT!...” A mysterious voice shouted from somewhere beyond the bright fug. “…Accept the newcomers, and let me see them!” The voice continued.

The white area suddenly exploded in to millions of small lights, leaving behind normal grass, trees, sky... The Dark chain and the Orb Forcefield al-so disappeared, finally freeing Spyro. Spyro was blind, because of the quick change of the light. He was in a totally dark area, when suddenly thousands of lights shone in to his eyes.
In front of the two dragons stood a large blue dragon, with large Dark blue wings. Behind the dragon, Cynder saw a huge crystal-like rock, wich was located in the middle of some old ruins. It was shining with a bright, blue and white light. “So it is true…” The old dragon spoke. “The two of you really did submit yourselves to the Darkness…Well then, it’s about time the two Legendary dragons to show up and lead the two chosen ones, to this very spot, but to do so, I must first remove the Darkness from your bodies.” The dragon took a short pause and continued: “Cynder, close your eyes, take a deep breath and empty your mind. Find the Light deep within yourself. And once found, unleash it, as a great force.”
Cynder stood for a while, and then risen on her back legs and shone with a marvelous light, unleashing a beautiful, bright light, which shone through the Moon ruins, even brighter then the light from the Spiritual stone.

While the Light fury shined, Cynder returned to her own size, as before. As for Spyro, the Darkness was removed from his body and he al-so returned to his old self.

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I hope you liked it smilie
Last edited at 22:26:41 18/07/2008 by Dark_Cynder
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#168 Posted: 20:38:40 18/07/2008
Ya know, if we'll have to decide, I'm voting for your version of the Chapter 18. I don't know why did I just betrayed myself? smilie
It is strange to make a chapter and admit, that the other's one is way better smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#169 Posted: 20:40:54 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Hold on leme read your chapter.smilie

How about we combine the two? Instead of Cynder unleashing the Light element there how about Cynder unleashes it there?
Last edited at 20:46:34 18/07/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#170 Posted: 20:44:16 18/07/2008
Ok
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#171 Posted: 20:49:06 18/07/2008
That sound like a good idea, but who will make the combined Chapter?
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#172 Posted: 20:52:15 18/07/2008
It must be me or you. Hmmm....
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#173 Posted: 20:59:29 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
I edited my Chapter now you edit your chapter so it fits mine. Just don't edit it to much because it is already awesome!smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#174 Posted: 21:01:55 18/07/2008
Ok, I'll get on it right now
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#175 Posted: 21:09:13 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
EDIT: Nice job!smilie Night Owl or Nalefor should do the next Chapter!
Last edited at 21:44:50 18/07/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#176 Posted: 21:49:10 18/07/2008
Thanks, C_R smilie You did a pretty great job, too.
We did our part, now it's up to our faithful Story-helpers smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#177 Posted: 21:54:17 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
NP!smilie But what do you mean by Cynder and Spyro had given themselves to the darkness? They didn't have a choice in our story or did they? Am I missing something?
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#178 Posted: 22:06:21 18/07/2008
No, you aren't missing anything, it's just that Blue old dragon with large Dark blue wings doesn't know the details, plus, "Submit yourselves to darkness" means making some one corrupt you, and you couden't resist it.
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#179 Posted: 22:07:14 18/07/2008
Atleast, that's what I think it means...
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#180 Posted: 22:10:47 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh thank you!smilie I thought there was Chapter I missed or something!
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#181 Posted: 22:13:14 18/07/2008
Believe me, we would never make you miss a single chapter smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#182 Posted: 22:13:30 18/07/2008
smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#183 Posted: 22:14:12 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
LOL!smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#184 Posted: 22:15:34 18/07/2008
Nalemor said something about him coming at night today, right?
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#185 Posted: 22:18:24 18/07/2008
I wonder, when the'll come Online?... I can't wait for the next Chapters! smilie
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#186 Posted: 22:19:15 18/07/2008
i could do the next chapter if it's okay with Night Owl smilie
(And it's Nalemor, not Nalefor smilie sounds too much like Malefor)
Last edited at 22:19:56 18/07/2008 by Nalemor
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#187 Posted: 22:22:28 18/07/2008
Woops, sorry about that smilie It really does looks like Malefor, that's why I keep on forgiving
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#188 Posted: 22:24:09 18/07/2008
I don't know, NiOwl didn't made a singe chapter for a while, now...
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#189 Posted: 22:24:28 18/07/2008
it's okay, a common mistake smilie
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#190 Posted: 22:25:43 18/07/2008
well right now i don't have time to write a chapter, so if NiOwl wants to write it he is welcome to do so, i'm just on here for a few more minutes
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#191 Posted: 22:28:29 18/07/2008
Will you be online again, today?
(I edited my mistakes about "Nalemor=Nalefor" thing smilie)
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#192 Posted: 22:30:27 18/07/2008
okay smilie Yes, i will be on again today, might be late though, possible around 8-9 P.M. central time
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#193 Posted: 22:32:17 18/07/2008
Um, I'm not from the USA, so translate "around 8-9 P.M. central time" on the web-site time, please smilie
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#194 Posted: 22:34:34 18/07/2008
hmm... 1:00-2:00 where are u from?
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#195 Posted: 22:34:48 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
What time is it where you live?
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#196 Posted: 22:35:40 18/07/2008
5:35 P.M.
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#197 Posted: 22:37:03 18/07/2008
Right now is 22:35, that means here is 01:35 smilie (+3 hours)
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#198 Posted: 22:40:36 18/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks but I meant D_C.smilie

BTW I will change it too Nalemor in a sec.smilie
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#199 Posted: 22:45:59 18/07/2008
oh okay smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#200 Posted: 22:48:20 18/07/2008
What do you mean? Avatar?

Time translation:
Website time: 22:50
Where I live in: 01:50
Nalemor's time: ??:?? (Translate...)
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