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Spyro: The Third beginning *Spoilers from DotD* [CLOSED]
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1001 Posted: 05:40:30 03/02/2013
Well, Samius... I bet you'll take a rest before start posting your story again...
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1002 Posted: 12:45:43 03/02/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 54.

Taking to the skies, Spyro glided towards the ship. He then saw it, a great galleon, anchored a few hundred meters from the shore.

Mirra and Balak rushed to follow him. Ember flapped her wings and flew next to Spyro.

"Wow, it's so big." She said.

Spyro nodded, and replied: "Let's go, I want to see it closer."

The heroes reached the shoreline in minutes, there were already a couple of sailors waiting for them in rowboats.

"Ahoy! Over here!" The mole shouted.

As the heroes approached, the mole started speaking with a loud voice.

"You must be the ones who we are to take across the sea, yes?" The mole said.

"Yes, we need to go to Kassa." Spyro replied.

"Very well then. Step on the boat, we'll take you to our galleon." The mole said.

Spyro, Mirra and Ember climbed on the boat, but Balak didn't move at first.

"I just realized. My men, I must first send them back." He said.

Balak turned around, picked up a horn from his belt, and blew loudly three times. He then turned and entered the boat, which creaked oddly when the heavy ape stepped on the wood. A couple of mole sailord started to row the boats towards the galleon.

Spyro noticed that Ember seemed to not to want to look down in the water..

"Is something wrong?" He asked Ember.

"No. Nothing." She replied sharply.

"Are you afraid of the water?" Balak suddenly asked her.

"Uhh.. No." Ember whispered quietly, looking nervous.

Mirra, Balak and Spyro looked at each other, and decided it was best not to keep going on about it. They staid quiet for the rest of the journey to the galleon.

When they climbed onto the ship, the captain immediately approached them. He was a middle-aged mole, dressed in a gold-timmed coat and a hat that seemed to be too big for his head. He raised his arm and shouted.

"In service of Terrador, the guardian of Warfang. I bid you welcome to my ship. I am Rossa, the captain of this mighty vessel."

"Thank you" Spyro answered, before he could continue the captain opened his mouth again.

"We'll set sail once the preparations are complete. I've been instructed to direct you to person who will be able to brief you on your heroic mission." The captain said.

"I see, where is this person?" Spyro asked.

The captain waved his arm, and immediately one of the mole sailors came to them. The heroes oblidged, and followed the mole below deck.

The space under the deck was very cramped. Stacked crates and barrels took most of the space, and the whole area was illuminated by nothing but a few oil lamps. The strong scent of mold creeped in Spyro's nostrils..

There, an old mole carrying around a sack of scrolls and parchments approached them. He was obviously the one they were suposed to meet.

"Hail, purple dragon." The old mole said with a creaky voice.

"Greetings." Spyro answered, "Are you the one who is supposed to give us some information on our mission."

"Yes, I believe I am." The old mole said, and lead the Heroes to a small, round table. There, he pulled out an old parchment scroll and spread it on the table.

(To be continued.)

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Damn, sorry. I don't have enough time to completely finish this chapter, but at least it will be easy to continue writing. I'll finish it later this week if I can, since I sometimes have internet access in the brigade.
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1003 Posted: 12:54:47 04/02/2013
Need to read previous comment...
And the previous...
more previous...
NEED TO READ FIRST FANFIC!!!
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1004 Posted: 15:40:26 04/02/2013 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I know. It's been a long time since my last post, but you gotta understand. I have a job IRL. I'm a corporal in the military.
I practically live where I work, and I don't get to come home often. That doesn't leave me a lot of time to write.
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1005 Posted: 02:47:13 06/02/2013
Hey, Samius... You don't need to finish your story soon... You just need to focus in the military...
Anyway, we can wait it anytime... As long as we live... smilie
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1006 Posted: 12:42:52 06/02/2013
Yeah...
Just, do what you have to do... in IRL...
You know...a corporal is an achievement...

Keep it up... smilie
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1007 Posted: 21:54:43 06/02/2013
Im not good with encourging words or spelling so...
I'l just say what the others said....
smilie
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#1008 Posted: 21:34:22 29/05/2013
*bumb* Because the story is worth of one bumb
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1009 Posted: 10:52:49 31/05/2013
Knock Knock
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1010 Posted: 00:01:30 02/06/2013
How are you, Samius? Ready to write your new chapter?
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1011 Posted: 23:23:18 13/07/2013
I somtimes worry if Samius has died when things like this happen.
It's quite worrying and it kinda makes me feel bad that I am waiting for a story while he is working in the Military.
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1012 Posted: 11:30:37 14/07/2013
Let's just hope he's okay.... I'm sure he'll post his story... soon...
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1013 Posted: 04:05:45 15/07/2013
*Knock Knock*
(Starting to feel anxious)
Samius...you there?
MrW Yellow Sparx Gems: 1356
#1014 Posted: 20:30:11 05/08/2013
Don't worry, he's not died. Writing stuff just takes time if you want to keep the quality.
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Science, *****!
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1015 Posted: 23:00:15 07/08/2013
Oh thank goodness.I can carry on waiting then. smilie
StalkerSnake Yellow Sparx Gems: 1926
#1016 Posted: 04:37:22 02/09/2013
Wow. This is amazing!
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Чем больше вы знаете, тем больше вы знаете
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1017 Posted: 19:47:46 27/09/2013
i need more of the story its just to good and there is so much suspence. i cant wait! really i think im getting a headache just wanting to know what happens next.
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1018 Posted: 12:54:32 28/09/2013 | Topic Creator
Wow, I'm still getting new readers?

Yeah, to reply to all those posts made months ago, I am still alive. I'm no longer in the military, but I have other things to do IRL.

I have not, however, abandoned this story. As I told Denragon who actually contacted me via my guestbook, I am currently writing couple of chapters. I'll post them all in a bundle of five once I have them finished, but I don't know how long it will take. I currently have about three done.

Again, I'm sorry that this has taken me months to do.
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1019 Posted: 16:43:27 28/09/2013
great, i have been listining to a song that is perfect for spyro's perdicament with cynder. it is called Sorry by Daughtry
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1020 Posted: 12:15:48 29/09/2013
Wow, theuone... I'll listen to that music too... smilie
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1021 Posted: 15:09:44 29/09/2013 | Topic Creator
It's always nice to see people post their own interpetations of the fanfic. That basically means they're interested in the characters.

Anyway, I'm determined I'll get some writing done tomorrow, but I probably won't be able to post the chapters yet.
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1022 Posted: 16:53:41 29/09/2013
I am very much glad that you are not dead Samius, and am very happy to hear that you haven't given up on this fanfic. smilie
I' trying to wright one myself but always get distracted as soon as I start writing...Now for example.
Anyway glad to see your back smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1023 Posted: 19:08:36 29/09/2013 | Topic Creator
If you need any tips check out one of my old topics. I once made a tip-topic for writers who want to know more about writing stories.

//forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=51637
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1024 Posted: 21:25:18 29/09/2013
Thanks for the advice Samius smilie
Oh and I finally stopped procrastinating long enough to finish writing the chapter.
Dang I'm lazy...
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1025 Posted: 21:31:02 29/09/2013 | Topic Creator
I haven't been writing in six months. With the first fanfic I had almost a year-long break there in between two chapters. So talk about lazy.

Truth to be told, and as much as you people seem to like my story, writing is just one of my hobbies and it's not really big for me either. I just write when I feel like it.
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1026 Posted: 21:40:19 29/09/2013
I enjoy writing quite a lot but get very worried whenever someone else reads it for fear of it just being plain awful :/
But I really enjoy storytelling and writing so I do it anyway smilie
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1027 Posted: 19:59:04 01/10/2013
countinueing what i said before, when i listen to Sorry and try to visulize what happens in the story, well let me put it this way: i will go insane by sorrow unless i find out weither or not Spyro and Cynder make up with each other.
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1028 Posted: 18:58:40 05/10/2013
do tell, when do you think you will have more chapters up?
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1029 Posted: 13:23:45 06/10/2013
@theuone: I'm sure Samius will post his chapters... As soon as he can. So, be patient... smilie . Anyway, your song "Sorry by Chris Daughtry" is great. I like it.
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1030 Posted: 13:49:53 06/10/2013 | Topic Creator
Quote: theuone
do tell, when do you think you will have more chapters up?


Probably in the next two weeks if I get enough time to write. I have a lot of other work besides writing, and I'm trying not to let this story chain me down.
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1031 Posted: 09:46:25 08/10/2013
Two weeks? Well... No problem, Samius... We can wait. smilie
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1032 Posted: 21:53:44 08/10/2013
yeah i think i can wait that long. after all the fourth wings of fire book is due to come out at the end of the month. so i think it will be a piece of cake to wait for more chapters(thinking silently- cake yum)
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1033 Posted: 23:37:12 23/10/2013 | Topic Creator
I've got one and a half chapters to go, then I'll post all five of them. I just have a lot of IRL stuff related to employement and such keeping me busy.
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1034 Posted: 06:29:27 24/10/2013
smilie Did you say 5 chapters smilie Yay!
Thank you very much Samius
StalkerSnake Yellow Sparx Gems: 1926
#1035 Posted: 13:05:00 31/10/2013
I can not wait ^.^
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Чем больше вы знаете, тем больше вы знаете
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1036 Posted: 12:20:43 04/11/2013
I haven't been here a while...good thing I don't miss a chapter smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1037 Posted: 00:46:42 08/11/2013 | Topic Creator
I apologise that I haven't been able to update the story as I promised, I think I've hit a writer's block again. So much IRL stuff to think about that I can't spare many thoughts to the story.

I could just post the three chapters that I already have finished, if you don't want to wait for all five. That way you'd at least get to read at least a bit more of the story.

I'll have to do it later this weekend though, because I have an important english exam on saturday to study for.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#1038 Posted: 20:22:53 08/11/2013
We have waited this long, waiting a little bit more doesn't make diference
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1039 Posted: 23:18:44 08/11/2013
I agree with deaver we can wait a little bit longer.
After all, IRL stuff is more important than fan fiction.
smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1040 Posted: 12:40:31 09/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Quote: deaver88
We have waited this long, waiting a little bit more doesn't make diference


Jumalauta. Sä käyt täälä vieläkin? :D

Sori että oon joutunu odotteleen, en oo valehdellu noista syistä minkä takia en oo kirjoittanu enempää.

Ja no, onhan tämä vain yks mun harrastuksista.
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1041 Posted: 17:58:26 09/11/2013
yeah I can wait after all I still am busy so i'm preoccupied and able to think about other stuff. i'll be fine if I have to wait forever as long as I can find out if Spyro and Cynder can make up. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e6oYmHdMWzw - thats the song I was talking about, I dare you to listen to it while imagining what happens in this story.
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#1042 Posted: 02:37:04 11/11/2013
@theuone
I've listened to that music... It's great, bro... smilie
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
ShadowMewX Diamond Sparx Gems: 8044
#1043 Posted: 21:30:39 14/11/2013
Wow, Samius! This is an amazing fanfiction. I can't wait for the next chapter! smilie
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Let's bust bunsen burners and bounce!
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1044 Posted: 09:20:59 22/11/2013
Hm, it's been dead for 8 days (more or less...), hope its still can...

*Cast a resurrection spell on this fanfic*

YES, it may take a while to wake...
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1045 Posted: 21:14:14 04/12/2013
how much longer do we have to wait, if I don't find out wheither or not Spyro and Cynder make up I might go insane. please post at least one more chapter soon.
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
Youla Yellow Sparx Gems: 1982
#1046 Posted: 21:26:22 27/12/2013
Be Patient...the Resurrection spell is still on the work smilie
theuone Platinum Sparx Gems: 6184
#1047 Posted: 21:32:37 27/12/2013
as long as this story does not close, it'll probably kill me to have a story stopped with Spyro heartbroken and his entire world turned upside down.
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On board Spyro Reignited hype, Choo choo!
Thanks to BlackWing116 for the Chimera drawing
Metaphorical phantom here, Blame everything lol.
dark spyro1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1778
#1048 Posted: 22:52:58 31/12/2013
Yeah I know what you mean.
We are not smart enough to come up with our OWN ENDING! HALP US! HALP US SAMIUS!
smilie
ShadowMewX Diamond Sparx Gems: 8044
#1049 Posted: 21:53:21 10/01/2014
I hope he considers posting the chapters he already has written...we're all pretty excited!
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Let's bust bunsen burners and bounce!
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#1050 Posted: 02:36:39 12/01/2014 | Topic Creator
I haven't given up on writing, but allow me to post a thorough explanation as to why I haven't posted more of this fanfic yet.

You see, writing is only a hobby of mine. I don't do it constantly. I am currently 20 (soon to be 21) years old, my military conscription just ended 6 months ago and ATM I'm trying to get a place in the police academy in Finland.
So you can probably quess how much time I spend studying and working out to get a clear hold of my future. Before that, I can't really spare much time for my hobbies, like writing this story.

But anyway, as I said. I will update this story with 5 new chapters the moment I have finished them all completely. I haven't forgotten about it. It just isn't on my agenda right now, as my life and occupation are much larger priorities than this fanfic.

I hope you understand the gravity of the situation, and I hope you can be patient.

If you wish, I can send you all a PM the next time a post new chapters.
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