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Spyro: The Third beginning *Spoilers from DotD* [CLOSED]
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#51 Posted: 22:12:07 25/11/2009
Oh Dear, hard way to break the news
Anyway, good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
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#52 Posted: 00:01:32 26/11/2009
Very good chapter, and your preaty good at emtions, i sertainly could feel them.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#53 Posted: 06:35:21 26/11/2009
Do we have to wait long? this is heart breaking stuff. please continue
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205
#54 Posted: 14:49:13 26/11/2009
it must be hard 2 tell your parents that your brother
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
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#55 Posted: 14:50:37 26/11/2009 | Topic Creator
..died?
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#56 Posted: 15:39:15 26/11/2009
Yeah i'd imagine that would be a hard thing to do.
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#57 Posted: 15:50:02 26/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Mmaaaybe.. I dunno, never had to do it before..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#58 Posted: 11:02:10 27/11/2009
Answer the question. when?
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#59 Posted: 16:22:57 28/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I don't have time to write today, I'll add more on tomorrow morning if I can..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#60 Posted: 20:05:27 28/11/2009
YES!! uh..i mean...i hope you can
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
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#61 Posted: 13:46:06 29/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm 'ere now, couldn't get on earlier because of my sis.. Here's more..


Chapter 5.

Spyro felt defeated, he had hoped his mother would have understood him..

But, it was all indifferent now, the worst had already happened..

"Maybe I should just leave.." Spyro thought..

Then he heard a voice behind him.. He turned around to see who it was, and saw Cynder running towards him..

"Spyro, wait!" She shouted, "Don't go!.."

"Cynder?.. Did I say something wrong?.." Spyro asked her..

"No, Spyro.. Your mother was just shocked, that's all.." Cynder said..

"That's all?.. My brother is dead, my parents hate me and you're saying thats all?!" Spyro shouted..

"Spyro, don't yell at me, I'm just trying to help you!.." Cynder yelled..

"You're clearly not doing any good!.. I.. just want to be alone for a while.." Spyro..

"Hmh! Fine.." Cynder said, and ran off..

Spyro left the village and wandered off to the surrounding swamps. There he sat for hours, thinking about his own misery, until it started to rain heavily, and he decided it was time to return..

Back at the village, nobody was there to greet him. Everybody had returned to their homes because of the rain..
Spyro walked to his parents home, and saw Cynder sitting under a giant mushroom..
When he approached Cynder lifted her nose up and looked the other way, she was still mad at him obviously..
Fortunately, Spyro was too tired to start a fight now..

"Where's Hunter?.." He asked..

"He's gone." Cynder said, "He got a message from his tribe, and left in a hurry."

"Ah.. I see.." Spyro said and laid down next to her. He closed his eyes, and tried to sleep..

After a while, Cynder also laid down. Spyro felt her warm body leaning on him as she brushed her cheek against his, asking for comfort..

Spyro smiled quietly, and tried to hold his hopes high..


That's it for now. I'll add more when I can, but it might take awhile because of the school.. You understand, I hope..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#62 Posted: 14:45:30 29/11/2009
yes i understand... good chapter.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#63 Posted: 14:50:47 29/11/2009
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#64 Posted: 15:55:32 29/11/2009
Good chapter, can't wait till the nextsmilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#65 Posted: 17:19:25 29/11/2009
Awesome chapter.Also,sorry I haven't been on.School,heartbreaking stuff,and my mom have been keeping me away.But I LOVE the story either waysmilie!I'll keep loving this story forever!
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Wait, what?
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#66 Posted: 07:06:54 30/11/2009
I wonder what kind of message Hunter obtained from his tribe....
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
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#67 Posted: 14:35:40 03/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Oky, it's been a while, and I apologize for that. I can write more tomorrow, cuz it's friday then..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#68 Posted: 17:36:26 03/12/2009
*cheers*
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Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#69 Posted: 21:05:07 03/12/2009
YES!!!!!!
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#70 Posted: 03:45:15 04/12/2009
Yay!I can wait!I'll sneak on again onto the internet at night...heh heh heh!I'll read it at night!
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Wait, what?
spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205
#71 Posted: 04:30:02 05/12/2009
cant wait
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#72 Posted: 14:13:15 05/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry, I'm terribly sorry! I forgot to write.. You might have noticed I wasn't even online yesterday, so I have an alibi!

I'll write more nao, it might take a while..
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#73 Posted: 15:59:59 05/12/2009 | Topic Creator
..


Chapter 6.

Spyro was starting to wake up after a nights rest. He hadn't had much sleep, because of the unfortunate incident that had happened yesterday..

He opened hie eyes, and noticed that Cynder was still asleep next to him. Spyro didn't want to wake her up..

"I wonder if my mother's okay.." He thought, "I hope shes not angry to me.."

After a while, Cynder slowly started to show signs of waking up. Spyro licked her nose slowly..

"Waaaahh!.. " Cynder yawned..
" Spyro? How long have you been awake?.." She said, once she noticed him..

"I just woke up.. I didn't get to sleep much at all.." He answered..

"Ah huh.. " Cynder said, and kissed him on the cheek, "It'll be okay Spyro.."

Spyro felt a tickling sensation inside his body..

"Thanks Cynder.." He said," That really means a lot.."

"I'll help in any way I can.." Cynder replied..

"I.. I hope you can forgive me about what happened yesterday.. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings.."

"Think none of it.." Cynder said, "It's okay.."

Spyro nodded..

"Where did Hunter go, by the way?.." He asked..

"I don't know exactly.. All he told me, was that he got a word from his tribe to return.."

"Ah.. Well, I ques it had to be important.." Spyro said..

Cynder nodded in her turn. She heard a quiet screech, as the door of Flash and Nina's nest opened..

"S.. Spyro?.." Spyro heard a weak, female voice to say..

It was Nina. She carefully flew to Spyro, looked at Cynder, then said..

"Could you leave us alone for a while?..Please.."

"Uh.. Sure.." Cynder said, rose up from the ground, and walked away leaving Spyro and Nina alone..

An uneasy silence followed, as both of them didn't know what to say..

"So.." Nina started, "Who was that Female dragon?" She said, and tried to smile..

"She's.. My friend.." Spyro said, he didn't want to tell her mother who that young dragon really was.. Or had been..

"I see.. Do you think we could talk about.. You know.. What happened?.." Nina asked..

"Yeah.. Go ahead.." Spyro said..

"Your father told me what happened after I.. Uh.. Left.." Nina said, "I just want you to know that I'm happy you're here now. I don't blame you for what happened.."

"Thanks mom.." Spyro said, and raised his head off the ground..

"That's.. That's all.. We can talk later, okay?.." Nina asked..

"Ah.. Ok.." Spyro answered, and lowered his head again..


There, I'll try to post more soon enough..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#74 Posted: 16:03:21 05/12/2009
good chapter.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#75 Posted: 17:35:37 05/12/2009
Good chaptersmilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#76 Posted: 18:47:55 05/12/2009
*nods* Good,good
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
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#77 Posted: 19:18:11 05/12/2009
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
thedarkmaster09 Blue Sparx Gems: 784
#78 Posted: 20:53:35 07/12/2009
aw, I'm late for your fanfic again, but I've read it so far and its good
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It's a dancing Hamster
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 20:55:38 07/12/2009 by thedarkmaster09
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#79 Posted: 07:30:18 10/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Ehh.. I'll try to add more later, might not happen 'cuz I got a lot of schoolwork to do..
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#80 Posted: 08:24:41 10/12/2009
I hate schoolwork. Pity you.
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#81 Posted: 14:29:26 10/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeh, me too, I'm really stressed out because of it.. That's why I've been taking a break from writing.. :/
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#82 Posted: 19:08:18 10/12/2009
Awww.....well. Soon as possible, rigth?
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#83 Posted: 13:48:51 11/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll try..
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#84 Posted: 16:59:35 11/12/2009
Soon?
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#85 Posted: 18:53:54 11/12/2009
Awsomest!! Love it. smilie Moar please smilie
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Back from hibernation.
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#86 Posted: 19:11:06 11/12/2009
hi, im catching up rite now.

good chapters
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#87 Posted: 19:22:39 11/12/2009
alrite caught up! those were good chapters, i would find it kinda hard to tell my parents if my sister died in my care(dont have a brother)

hope you can write soon, and sorry about the few double posts to.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#88 Posted: 09:21:34 12/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Night Owl
Awsomest!! Love it. smilie Moar please smilie


Can this be true?.. Do I actually have a new reader?

Have you read The Second Beginning before this one? You'll miss alot of story if you don't read the first part..
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#89 Posted: 10:21:59 12/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I have some time now, so I'll post some more..

Chapter 7.

Spyro walked away from his mother with a sad face. But at least, he knew now that his mother didn't blame him for Sparx's death..

It was a good thing to know, but somehow Spyro still knew that Nina didn't tell him everything..

Soon, Cynder catched up with him.
"Spyro?.. Are you okay? What did she say?.." Cynder said, with a worrying tone..

"She's lying.. I can see it from her eyes.." Spyro said, and growled angrily, "She says it's not my fault, but she hates me! She want's me to feel guilty!.." Spyro yelled..

Cynder backed off, she knew she had to be careful when Spyro was mad..

"Spyro.. Shes your mother. She doesn't hate you.." Cynder said.

"No! She is not my mother! I'm a dragon!.. And now she hates me because her real son is dead, because of me!.." Spyro said, and rammed his head to a nearby tree, scaring off any dragonflies that were looking for bugs in the top..

"Spyro! Calm down.. You're paranoid, and you're starting to scare me.." Cynder said, trying to gather as much courege as she could to those words..

Spyro turned his head to Cynder, staring her with a mad look on his face..

"You.." Spyro said, then shook his head and turned away without finishing what he was going to say..

Cynder looked shocked, she had last seen Spyro that mad when Ignitus had died..

"I'm sorry.." She said weakly.. "Can't we stop this fighting already?.. I'm tired of all this.."

"Hmh.." Spyro said, and sat down, facing away from Cynder..

Cynder too turned away, and walked off.. Maybe Spyro just needed some time..


That's it for now, I'll try to add the second one tomorrow..
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#90 Posted: 12:17:02 12/12/2009
ok that was good.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#91 Posted: 12:21:40 12/12/2009
Yar. I love it smilie
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Back from hibernation.
spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205
#92 Posted: 13:05:39 12/12/2009
cool chapters
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#93 Posted: 13:10:40 12/12/2009
Good chapter!
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I'm batman!! Shh...
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#94 Posted: 15:09:42 12/12/2009
Poor Sypro
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
thedarkmaster09 Blue Sparx Gems: 784
#95 Posted: 17:54:17 12/12/2009
Nice chapter, can't wait for the next one
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It's a dancing Hamster
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#96 Posted: 20:08:18 12/12/2009
I have bad feeling.....
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#97 Posted: 14:24:28 14/12/2009
^ I agree that doesnt put a good feeling of wat mite happen.

good chapter!
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9224
#98 Posted: 06:28:32 15/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Oky, I'm at school now.. I'll try to add more later today..
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6120
#99 Posted: 06:48:20 15/12/2009
Today?
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#100 Posted: 11:57:55 15/12/2009
Okay.
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